by Startle Me Jun 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
An elderly walks with his lovely cane, |
by eehcuhhhz
Well done :] |
by C P Sharma
The flow, the diction and the development of the theme are superv. Loved it. |
by Danielle
Wondrful. you turned a very "sing-song" kind of rhyme scheme into something beautiful. |
by Lisa
Wowamazing write |
by Tammie
Original, and I like it. The flow was flawless, with a good range of vocab and rhyme. The ending really summed this poem up well, I like that you didn't have him die, just hear deaths tune. A very well penned piece. 5/5 |