You said eyes twice in your first line.
It made your it redundant.
Maybe you could change it into
When my eyes met yours.

The heart, in my mind the most complex body part.
Really forced in my eyes.

Because this happening, we [[can�t]] escape from
That happens to me too :P

All in all.
I felt it was a bit forced, out of structure.
You should recheck your poem once you post it.
You might end up having symbols on it.

All in all.
It was alright.
It caught my attention, though.
4/5?
Hmm...
I don't know if I should downvote you.
You might get offended.
Would you mind?
PM me if yes.
Ignore this if no. :]

I perceive this piece with great promise. It has the potential to be augmented in the future. Now, if I may suggest, perhaps breaking it into stanzas will enhance the flow? ...overall, it's a nicely written piece. In which way, certain descriptions and phrases caught my attention with mild interest.

Nice work, nonetheless.

Great poem. The word choice was great. Um, there was one typo that I saw. The flow is a little off but it isn't anything to bad. I gave it a 5/5.

This is an excellent poem. the meaning and emotions are conveyed great. nice work

It was a great poem. the flow was almost there and the words that had been all weird (eg:can�t) but i loved it just wish i knew what those words were meant to be. i gave you a 5/5. great work