This was an interesting poem. I am greatly intrigued by "butterfree"? I think it is meant to bring the image of a butterfly but changed so it is able to fit the rhyme scheme better? Anyway, props on the great poem and feel free to enlighten me if I was wrong on the "butterfree" part.

-AOTD/Kurt

That was diffrent, and enlighting at the same time, the word choice was excelllent, and the emtion was strong, I really enjoyed reading this, the butterfree part really left me wondering though, What is butterfree, i must know. The flow was great, all in all I say that you have a well written poem here. 5/5

I really wasn't supposed to read this, but ehhhh we won't tell. [Since it's for my contest.]
But.
I really, really like it.
I haven't read any of the other entries, so I don't know how well you've got it, but with that description and emotion. BOOM.

Anyways.
I love your choice of words and "actions" here. This was penned beautifully. I normally do not like nonrhyming, but you pulled it off most gorgeously and with such grace.

"How shallow is
the brightest sun?"
[[I fricken ADORE that line. Puts it as her msn name. >.< Lmao]]

Beautiful done, Teria.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

This poem is a pleasure to all readers who read this.
It was so enlightning, I absolutely loved it

A million years
within your time;
but only a day
within my mind.

This Stanza was skilled so perfectly and the flow it is flawless.

~Katee

Lol I was thinking when I saw the title "isn't that a pokemon?'. Pokemon is greatness.

I liked this one, i dont follow pokemon, i am 19.
But i liked the way the word Butterfree was used, it did flow with the poem which was perfect by the way!

Nice story ^^ I know alot about poke'mon never knew that butterfree symbolized darkness