"We jump until we can't,
And our legs start to give.
We jump out of the turns
And its no longer our turn to live."

The stanza mentioned above was quite provocative, at least, to me. Unlike the previous poems, I don't find this piece particularly funny or amusing, only the jump rope theme =P. For such a short, simple piece, it encompasses so much concerning Life... Hmmm, very nice work. :D 5/5 Debbie

P.S. Thank you for the comments.