Hope

by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX   Jun 9, 2007


Eyes softly closed
lost in a dream
you look soo sweet
and just to think
you are the angel
i gave birth to
they said you would be
a burden to my life
but all i see is
joy and hopes
when i look
at you lie still
asleep

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  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    That is so sweet i love seeing babies because its true everyone is a package of hope for this worlds future God knows we need more good ppl in this life

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticVixen

    This touched me in a way I can't even explain. I do nothave children of my own but this write went straight to my core. Short but laoded with originality!!

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    This was yet another lovely poem mate.
    babies are sposed to be the best thing in a person's life, but there are a few cases in which that's not true, sadly. anyway 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This little piece endears me completely.

    "they said you would be
    a burden to my life"

    That couplet gave me the impression of the effects of a premarital sex, or a premature baby, or so-ons or so-ons... But then again, I liked the way the subject seemed to appreciate and acknowledge a priceless pearl in her life. =) Simply endearing. all the best and take care! ~Debbie

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