"All my dreams are lost
Turned to dust
By five little words
I dont love you anymore"

favorite part.. even a short poem can be really good.. nice one yo.. all of the poems from you that i've read so far are all depressing.. and it's so heart-grabbing... great poem!

Well I guess that heart felt emotions could hardly be expressed any better than you have done. Young love can be hard as this is evident in your poem. Nice job , keep it up.