Love / Pain (339) {Diamond Poem}

by NinjaGirl   Jun 9, 2007


Love / Pain

Love
Sparkling, desireable
Happy, uncertain, hurts
Murders, breaks, laughs, cruelty
Aches, shakes, kills
Yelling, crying
Pain

~Not too good but it's my first Diamond Poem~

©opyrighted by Kitty De'Kat

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I actually liked this one =) I give it a totally 5 lols and I love your profile =D To bad none of my friends are like you lols All of them get spooked if I start acting like my crazy normal self lols
    Anyway, great poem =)
    Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    It pretty good for a first try ^^ I'll give you a 4/5 but don't feel bad, you'll get better