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by Mary Rose Jun 9, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
It felt like I was stabbed to death [Quatrain - my 1st attempt]It felt like I was stabbed to death My heart wounded, shattered like glass All the things that were said to me Oh how I wish I never heard The pain is so unbearable It felt like I was stabbed to death Oh how I wish it was a dream That this heartache is not for real The bleeding wound wont stop, I weep Your words strikes my heart, way too deep It felt like I was stabbed to death My heart is wounded, will it mend? Countless tears Ive cried every day Cos of my injured heart that bleeds Profusely, never seems to end It felt like I was stabbed to death.
by Reminders Torture
This poem was heartaching. i felt it so deep The pain is so unbearable It felt like I was stabbed to death Oh how I wish it was a dream That this heartache is not for real The bleeding wound wont stop, I weep Your words strikes my heart, way too deep It felt like I was stabbed to death My heart is wounded, will it mend? best stanza of all. hope you right more good poems as that. 5/5 superb work best wishes