Of all of the sins such as pride, envy, or lust
There is no greater sin than betrayal of trust

This is so true and well written. I love your wordings. Its flawless.

Of all of the sins such as pride, envy, or lust
There is no greater sin than betrayal of trust

This is so true and well written. I love your wordings. Its flawless.

This is flawless.
i absolutely LOVED IT.
well done.
The rhyming is fantasitc and the rhythm is outstanding. I loved loved loved it!!!! =]
well done!
Geo
ps. if u have time please comment my latest?
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That's insanely well worded. I really liked it, even though i had a hard time understanding it. Really well done

I read your poem and found it quite interesting. Nice words and good flow kept my attention. I look forward to reading more of your works to see what appears when they are turned over.