The Friend Ship (IMPROVED!!!!)

by Poetess Lana   Jun 9, 2007


Okay... every other verse is a different person, there were two people and four verses. mine are the first and third, Ravyn's are the second and fourth. Originally there were three people writing and six verses, however, the third person, Ravyn, and I had a falling out and we refuse to speak to each other now.
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Friendship is love,
Love, friendship.
We wonder where it
will take us...

Sometimes it gets confused
For something else,
something we lost
a long time ago...

It takes us down the
road, person by person,
in love and like
and hate.

For things we never knew,
a sisterhood so strong, A love
I've know so long and a hate for
things that have broken us.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ayanda Elena

    She must have been horrible for you to cut out her part. A good peom any way.

    (Aww, come on it's no fun if I tell you)
    Aya

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    OMG Wo.Ot! I'm so happy it actually got fixed! I love it so much more now (but only the half that you wrote =D ) and all that Jazz. So ummm 5/5 (in all my semi-biased-ness)

    RavEy!

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