Not Knowing

by sabrina   Jun 9, 2007


Feeling cold
when i am hot
i know everything
or so i thought

holding my breath
trying to breathe
closing my eyes
when wanting to see

trying to run
not wanting to move
having to lie
but i know the truth

loving each day
screaming at night
trying to calm down
but having to fight

having to live
wanting to die
holding back tears
while trying to cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by sabrina

    Thanks! <3

    xoxo Sabrina

  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    This was really good. the way it was written was very different but i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by sabrina

    Thanks soo much feedback really helps me to do better next time

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Holding my breath
    trying to breathe
    closing my eyes
    when wanting to see

    The last line seemed little forced, but overall the poem flowed well and I gave honestly 4/5

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