Comments : Not Knowing

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Holding my breath
    trying to breathe
    closing my eyes
    when wanting to see

    The last line seemed little forced, but overall the poem flowed well and I gave honestly 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sabrina

    Thanks soo much feedback really helps me to do better next time

  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    This was really good. the way it was written was very different but i loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by sabrina

    Thanks! <3

    xoxo Sabrina