by Alison Jun 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The tears fall as rain |
by Gem
I agree with Dave, it may be short but it says all it needs to say and really hits with some impact! Well done! |
by David
Short and straight to the point, excellent. just how i like it, the last line was so powerful, an add on really to the 4th line. |