Love and let Die

by Alison   Jun 9, 2007


The tears fall as rain
Over and over again
Forget this never ending pain
Now only the scars will remain
Let it die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with Dave, it may be short but it says all it needs to say and really hits with some impact! Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Short and straight to the point, excellent. just how i like it, the last line was so powerful, an add on really to the 4th line.

    well done. 5/5 David