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I really like this poem!

i found a spelling mistake and would like to point you to it...

"as l count every singe"

"as l count every single"

no offence :) just tought i should mention it...

this poem really had a good flow...
and it never had holes in the way you put your words...

i love the whole concept of it,,,
and the way you put the meanings inside...
the order was really nice as well...

keep it up always!

Thanks for the comment on my poem!
it means alot to me

The midnite stars hold such pain
and all my sorrow
they withhold a key to hell

Wow this was a really dark and deep poem.
Very breathtaking and moving.
Loved that stanza it was absolutely amazing
:)

Take Care.

Deep and attractive for its dark nature. I loved the language you used, as it worked with the dialect; the dialect sounded Louisianian.

I would only recommend a spell check.

Firstly thank you so much for the comment you made on mine.This was very good ,as I read it I can feel so much emotion ,well done and keep writing.

Very good poem i liked it very much keep checkin mine out n i will surely return the favor

Very deep poem. the tone is very distinct and memorable