by Vanessa Jun 9, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Body tensed with pain and anger |
by Zeus
This is a fantastic dark poem. It was at great length. I wish you would've written more because it was unbelievable. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
Again the intensity in this poem too! It keeps me wanting to read more and more :). I love the vocabluary in this one, and how the tension builds up as she looks at death... |
by Francine
I thought that was amazing. Very well written |
by Ashley Ann
Good poem 5/5 |
Awesome! I loved the flow. I havent seen that type of rhyming before, where you would take two lines and rhyme them, and then do the same for the next. Totally original and emotional. I'm truly taken by this poem. I had to read it twice. :) 5/5 |