Hehehe I really liked this lols Short, cute, well formed and the flow was great =) 5/5 =D
and thanks for the comments =) I love your profile also lols
Rhea

Awww i really like this one, especially the ending line when he sday "I'll be free once more" 5/5 i guess its what most people dream of...

~NinjaGirl~

Wow, this is a very well writen poem! I agree with previous commenters that the last line really made this poem. The flow was really good, the words, the topic, everything wored together really well.
Keep it up! Woot, hehe, 5/5.

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist
Moogle lover