Save me

by Hana   Jun 10, 2007


My whole world's upside down-
can u save me by turning it all around?
take a pencil and erase that part of my memory-
draw me a smile because this is killing me.
you're not an artist but I think you can-
make beauty out of this ugly situation.
i'm falling apart as I walk on by- i want to believe that phone call was a lie..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, great flow and good wording, you are doing good , keep up the good work great job. your friend Tracy dean. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem 5/5 just follow your heart love can and will happen but it all starts with friendship Steve

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