Hmm.. i thought this was pretty good.. although its sad that you feel this way about one of your friends.. but i dont know the whole story so i cant really say anything. anyway i thought this was a really good poem. and it had flow to it.. please keep up the good work.

Good poem. The flow was good and I liked the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

It was oretty sorrowful and touching..I loved how you expressed a friend in your words
My fave lines should be;

I'm not going to change if that's what you think,
I like who I am even if you try to make me sink.

Keep it up,
Laura