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by x Mo x Jun 10, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
You know how I feel When you talk to me like that. I hate those words you say. Now we need to chat! You know what I am Respecting me most of the time. What happened just then? It stung like a cut drenched in lime. Those words you so spat That hit me in the heart. I don't remember it all But I do remember that part. I know that you try To play nice and speak kind. But today those words you said Put pain to my mind. They stung and they burned. Even though they weren't true. But now I am scared To even be around you. Please take back What you said today. I want to love you again, And enjoy what you say.
by MissAlyssaGraff
Aww, beautiful message. and nice flow and rhythym and rhyme. Geez Louise!
by XcrissyX
Omg i love this poem...i love the way it all flows and ryhmess good work xx
by Natalie
Nicely done. Wouldn't change a thing! The flow was great, awesome work! Keep it up!