by Natalie Jun 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Webs weaved tainted lies beneath skin, |
by Edward D Zurovec
An excellent write, as I was pulled into it by the first line and stanza. All is Vanity under the Sun. |
by Oscar
That was a really good poem. The rhyming wasn't forced at all and it flowed really well. |
by dora
That was soo good the words ur expression very well written xx |
Great poem :) love the wording and everything, great work.. |