Hey,
nice poem, the flow is good, only the rhyming scheme is a bit messy, but futher more its nice, 5/5
kisses stephanie

This poem really captured my emotions your a tallented writer and i loved the lat verse that made it for me xx

Great job. It's so sweet lol. Is this about you? lol aww I bet he misses you to lol 5/5
-vino

Gerat job.I liked this poem.It was good.Keep on writing.Your very talented.

Kelsie

'Her eyes start screaming' this is an extremely figurative sentence. Very beautifully written with a nice flow. Great 5/5 dear. tc

Wow!I loved this poem.The way you described how their eyes were really painted a great picture.It was full of emotion and the flow was nearly flawless.Very beautiful poem.5/5^_^

<3Amber