Comments : By the Water's Edge

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    It was a beautiful poem. your use of imagery and repetition made a nice effect. loved it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    I like the general idea - waiting by the waters edge for stars to come out is so romantic :) i also love the way you descibe the stars. great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    Beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Numb Handed

    Amazing and beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by shade127

    This was indeed very romantic...,makes me want to go and sit by the waters edge

  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    F-in sweet lol

    5/5 XD