I don't fear death
cuz I'm looking forward
to make you pay
the way you made me feel
is the reason you deserve to suffer
you torn my heart in pieces
I'd move on
but you still won't let it go
cuz you don't want others to see
what you did to me
I tried to keep moving
but you stood in my way
and when I stop living
I'm gonna make sure that you pay
the debt for not making my day
"I tried to keep moving
but you stood in my way
and when I stop living" my favorite lines.
The poem is really good, but you could make it little longer. Anyway, 5/5