Falling apart

by xo kisses xo   Jun 10, 2007


Her screams for help
Went unknown
Kept from the world
Felt so alone

Questions asked
No answers told
Why me Why now?
A heart so cold

A smile hides it all
Now no-one can see
The pain she beared
The apathy

One little heart
So full of sin
Afraid to let it out
She held it within

Too much pain
For one little heart
Shes falling away
She's falling apart

written really fast. not my greatest work...hope that you like it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    Wow I really liked this one and I can see a lot of others did too... Its a very good one and I think many people will be able to relate this to their real life

  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Wow! well if you 'speed wrote' that one then perhaps you need to speed-write many more!
    Brilliant!

  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    ONCE MORE I CAN RELATE THIS POEM...GOOD WRITE.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute... its simple but still this poem is enjoyable and you described things nicely... although the flow is off in parts its still a 5 :D

  • 17 years ago

    by grace

    I loved this poem and if thats not your greatest work well its definatly better than any of mine!

    *grace

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