by Tareyn Jun 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Doing my make-up...it's already running. |
by *Charisma*
Okay...I do like your poem. Your opening stanza was awesome! I think you kind of lost power towards the end by repeating baby a few times...but overall it was pretty good! |
by Ike Dizzle
Aww this sucks. I'm not sure if you want to talk about it but whta happened? If you want to talk about it. Great poem though. 5/5 |