The Pain of Losing You

by Tareyn   Jun 10, 2007


Doing my make-up...it's already running.
Crying, it hurts, the pain that is coming.

The thought of me without you, baby I just can't do it.
It hurts too much to think of all that we did.

Now it's gone. Faded away. I'm becoming empty again.
When it was you baby that made me smile and grin.

Off to school. Crying. A bad start to my day.
Reading your hurt and all that u say.

I love you babe with all of my heart.
With you is how I want my life to start.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Okay...I do like your poem. Your opening stanza was awesome! I think you kind of lost power towards the end by repeating baby a few times...but overall it was pretty good!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww this sucks. I'm not sure if you want to talk about it but whta happened? If you want to talk about it. Great poem though. 5/5
    -vino