Comments : The Pain of Losing You

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww this sucks. I'm not sure if you want to talk about it but whta happened? If you want to talk about it. Great poem though. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Okay...I do like your poem. Your opening stanza was awesome! I think you kind of lost power towards the end by repeating baby a few times...but overall it was pretty good!
    Charisma*