Ahem. 'love to play with kids.'? 'pop and lock it'? i think you meant pop lock and drop it. and those lines strangly resemble me.

Haha

I love this poem...it makes me giggle....and like Ian it does sound kind of familiar...lol...but yea..great work

Cool poem. I thought that it was kind of funny. The flow was good for the most part and the word choice was good. I gave it a 5/5.

4.3 is BULL! Stupid people, wouldn't know good poetry if it smacked them across the face ten thousand times lol.

Every single line hit me, every single line got better. It was fricken amazing, Lol. Oh man, I'm gonna end up blabbing, but I want to say something about every line because I've got so much bundled up there about this one, Lol.

You are amazing.
This is amazing.
Enough said.

5.5
:]
<3

Ok i have to say i was not expecting that alst word haha... wow ok i have to say i was a little iffy at first about this poem but those last lines made me really enjoy it... to me this poem was funny i do not know if you intedned it to be but it was = ] 5/5 from me and i know i spelt intended wrong

I really like this poem, It was intresting, great flow, excellent word choice, really refreshing reading, a subject that isn't overly done. 5/5

4.5? Hmmm. Okay then.
This was really good. :] I loved itt.
"Pray to [all] the gods and put the hot dog in the bun where the real God intended it to be."
^^ I think that was my favorite part of itt.
Not quite sure, I loved the entire poem. Lol.

Keep it up, hunni.
5/5

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I LOVE THIS POEM
Its GREAT
=D

*you must flee (versus you must flea)