Awsome!

Very good. I like it alot...very emotional in a way. You have great talent.

This is a good poem. but what's with all the death?

Nice poem.
Very deep.
Liked the rhyme scheme.
Maybe make it a bit longer? otherwise very nice.
Well Done

Keep SMiling x

Im not much into dark poems but this one was good. Kind of creepy with that last line.. Nice touch! 5/5

A strong poem keep it up!
=]

Great work!

Chilling but well done. such a way with wordsyou have. the word choicw was simple yet powerful, the emtion was deep and strong the flow was amazing, and the imagery was excellent. 5/5

Luv it!!
simple yet intense! keep going!
bree x

I lov the ending. its so deep. well done. it flows well. the poem hav lots of detail. writ mor:)

I liked it....this was a great poem...keep up the good work..
5/5

XoXsweetkissesXoX

Wow really good i loved it
_foever carly_

Wow this is amazing. Great imagery with interesting rhymes. I like the ending the most. 5/5

Awsome! i love it

Wow i must say...
very very dark poems. not my kind of poetry but its all good. out of all your poems i like this one the most. i dont relate to it but its almost like a theme. you can feel the words surround you, it made me feel a chill

Was your brain not awake when writing this ? ;] Cuhs' you spelled pieces wrong .

he tears them to peices ,bit by bit <-- See there .

Anyways, this, I find was much better than the other poem . Definitely . Loved it .

..__MiNDYY

Lol wow that was well hmmmm scary lol but in a good way and it was really bloody fantastic!!
top job

Wow! Great one, good rhymes and the whole poem is so unique.
Well done!
My favorite stanza is:
you feel that chill?
that intent to kill
you know he's there
with his knife he'll rip
he'll tear
Very unusual poem, and that's good.
5/5 from me

Wow very expressive.loved it well done

That was awesome dude...excellent truly excellent...kepp up the great work =)