REALLY A SWEET POEM. I M STUNNED Y IT IS NOT RATED BY ANY ONE??
5/5

I like this!
I love the realisation half way through its awesome...well done =]
take care
love geo
ps. if u have time, please comment my latest? thanks babe =] keep it up!

Hey,
nice poem, its sweet, I have only one little thing to say that I don't like, you use the word ''wanna'', but that's speaking language, I hope you understand what I mean. I think its better if you used ''want to'' instead of ''wanna''. well that's just me, I think the flow is okay and its easy to read so definitely a 5/5 from me,
kisses stephanie