by MyDevotion Jun 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
It's a good time, sun all day |
by Georgi
Hey! |
by Tammie
Aww this is soo sweet! The flow was good, and the way you wrote it, with the short lines and pauses in the middle worked very well. The description and vocab created great imagery. A really excellent ending as well. Good job. =] 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Nice word choice it was almost like I was there. I gave it a 5/5. |