Love in the Summer time

by MyDevotion   Jun 10, 2007


It's a good time, sun all day
girl in my arms, time to play
forever warmth, violet skies
comfort all around, no more lies,

beach ahoy, pull into lot
the whole day, we'll soon plot
hot sand, singe my toes
salt air, touches my nose,

Long hill, almost there
living life, without a care
waves crash down, without a sound
once were there, I won't be found,

bonfires hot, martini kisses
the home town, no one misses
her ocean eyes, I hold you tight
make love in the sand, under the moon light,

a warmth touch, the sea breeze
your face next to mine, wakes us with ease,
Another summer day, out on the road
just you and me, its all we'll know,

The memories in summer, us alone
not for one second, wanting to be home
our lips so sweet, pressed together
its the perfect love, under the perfect weather.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hey!
    the flow in this was excellent well done, your vocab too was perfect and created the most amazing imagery in my mind it was perfect! i really enjoyed this WELL DONE!!
    keep writing :)
    take care
    love Geo
    ps. if u have time please comment my latest? dont forget to vote!! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Aww this is soo sweet! The flow was good, and the way you wrote it, with the short lines and pauses in the middle worked very well. The description and vocab created great imagery. A really excellent ending as well. Good job. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice word choice it was almost like I was there. I gave it a 5/5.