Comments : Miss You Dad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,good flow and very sad, great job, keep it up 5/5 your friend Tracy dean

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Very sad, yet true of that people dont accept seath, my favorite bit is

    'i'm still in a dream,it doesn't seem real.
    Flashbacks and memories are stuck in my head'

    Keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Wonderful poem. i lost my father a few years ago, and i relate to this poem very much. beautiful work! =]