by DeathlyAmore
This. SHould be made into a song! |
Absolutely brilliant! |
I really like this piece it's almost like it should be a song with the way the 1 stanza is repeated over and over again. Fantastic work, great flow and imagery, the use of vocab in the poem was also wonderful. keep up the great work 5/5 GG23 |
by Teria
I absolutely lovedddd the repeated stanza. The first stanza, though.. well, it seemed to have words that were too big, eh. But, oh well. It was still amazing; along with the rest of the poem. |
by Tricky Daze
The mystery in this were so fabulous and great..It was so dark and sad..I liked the wording and the topic |
Alright! |
by Goran Rahim
This is another great poem by you, as always your poems never disappoint me with its value. you are such a great writer and i think i have told you that before. |
This was excellent. The flow was just perfect and the poem as a whole had a great mixture of emotions. Great wording, too. Keep up the good poetry. |
by Cody r
Cool |
by Brittini
Great job once again your vocab was great and so was the flow and it really should be a song. just amazing keep it up! |