Comments : Suicide

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowknight

    So true and detailed

    I am cold as the sea,
    my heart black as coal.
    Eyes are lifeless,
    as a dead man's corpse.
    is my favorite bit

    5/5 well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it has good atmosphere and you described emotions very well. Topic is excellent and you wrote this poem incredibly.