Good poem 5/5 keep writing

~NinjaGirl~

...It's missing something more pointed and vivid. Certainly there's emotion but it's almost cliche. It does have something intense near the end but lacks something. Sorry...that wasn't very helpful. I'm wowed by the emotional aspect but not enthused with the content. Okay but not great except with the emotion.
~Faith-less

I love this poem i can totally relate to it
5/5