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by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Jun 11, 2007


I let you hold me captive...
my will-power gone
i gave you control...
of my mind for to long

you took away inocence...
something i will never regain
you tried to hold me...
with my body twisted in pain

i told you no...
as you tore off my clothes
you just lokked at me...
as you ripped my shirt off by the bow

as i stand and try to walk away..
all my head can do is pound.
i swear this to myself...

one day i will take you down

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  • 17 years ago

    by shantavia

    Very sad was this ture but its a nice peom

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    This poem was truely amazing. i really dont know what to say, but this was amazing. i love the end. excellent job.
    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. i think this should go in the explicit area. and reread it for typos. other than that, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my, this is so powerful! Great poem with strong imagery.
    This piece hold so much emotions.
    Every line is superbly written.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so deep and heart breaking.
    it was so emotional.

    you took away inocence...
    something i will never regain
    you tried to hold me...
    with my body twisted in pain

    just loved this stanza.
    best wishes
    and take care

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