I though this was a good, heart-felt piece, with a calm flow. It truly showed what friendship should truly be like spread strength throughout .Although, saying that, there was one line I thought didn't belong, that should've been stronger
'And don't hide your face with your hair'
Not only did I think this line was weak, but it also, it broke the structure of the entire piece. But apart from that line, I thought this piece was rather good.

Brad

P.S. Sorry if I seem harsh, but I tell people my true opinions on their work...unlike most on this site.