Ticking thoughts causes migraine,
^ I know it would kind of mess up your rhyme scheme but it should be "cause migraines"

Awh, wow this was so greatt hunnyy. I loved itt. It was so simple yet it had so much meaning. The flow was good, the descriptions were detailed and kept my attention and I loved the metaphors in theree. I especially liked the last line, I don't know why but it jsut hit me. Great jobb! 5/5

Great poem. u always amaze me. ur wording is always spectacular. xx

Tatertot,
All your poems are brilliant.
No matter how long or short,
the blow me away.

Iloveyou.
And I miss you so much.

Can you believe it's been nearly a year since we saw eachother?
Man. Time, distance, it all sucks.

Nonetheless, you are my sunshine!
E>

Short and expressive to the max! 5/5