Poem Letter

by Gamaliel munoz   Jun 11, 2007


It feels like it was just yesterday
when my mind and my heart thought that I never meet someone like you
all my life I thought no one or any thing had the
power to melt my cold heart
a heart with deep scars weak
and delicate acting hard to get respect
pretending not to Love
A strong shield protecting it, rally hard to brake
mad up of old loves that became hate mixed with pain making It the best protection, combined with my mind making it
difficult for new loves to penetrate
The darkens part in my would waiting to fill up with love and sun light making rain and thunder go away All my life I was falling without even knowing
finding out when it was too late my mind and heart finally accepting the pain
but before hitting the floor I saw you
My heart started to beat so fast I remember seeing myself in your eyes the reflection more beautiful then the cleanest river in the would the stainless mirror in the wall in the riches houses
In the mirror what do I see? a boy so sad hopeless poor nothing good in it to see I felt like I have contaminate the cleanest water
never to be clean Thinking over and over that me and you will never mix
Then realizing that your heart had gone threw bad things having similar scars bruises finally Someone who under me Some one that has felt the pain the suffer the torture Some one looking for true love finally some one that doesn't play with peoples harts
I looked up at the dark sky the rain so cold running down my face the lightning so bright and scary it made my body Shakes Sending shivers and chills down my spine
In a blink of an eye the storm in my heart has cleared off
the shield is no longer there
The sunniest day I ever had became the
day we met
I think some how I am in love
Every thing around me got in to slow-motion I started to think,
all look like a fool if I fall for the same trick
But some how I took the risk
And now am here with you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dani

    I really like this one.. It shows in a way how for fallin in love is for some people.. I think it portrays it perfectly.. Lovin' it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was amazing like all your others =) Any girl that wins your heart is very lucky, she'll never doubt that shes loved ^_^ All your poems are full of such deep emotions that it blows me away =) Another well deserved 5 and I look forward to reading more from you in the future =)
    Rhea