I had it all

by Gamaliel munoz   Jun 11, 2007


I had it all
I had some one to love and to hold
I had some one to talk on the phone

When i was sad
I had some one cheer me up and make time fly
When i was down
I had some one to hold hands and pic me up
Making sure i wouldn't ever fall down

That some one is gone
That some one i still love
That some one i wish i had

Your heart full of love i once had
I piked it up and crushed it with my bare hands
It broke just like any fragile glass
I thought i dint need your love any more
I thought i could live alone
But i was wrong

I fell like crap
I want to talk
I want you back
Give me one more chance
Please take me back
I promise to make it up

If i had one wish
I would not wish for world peace
I would not wish to live 4 ever
I would not wish to cheat my way to heaven
I would not wish for no war
I would wish to have your heart
i promise to keep it in a safe spot

Please look at me in my eyes
think about what i said
If i don't have you i rather be dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    You have done a very good poem here, the only thing that throws me off is the spelling mistakes. I'm very particular about grammer and spelling so thats why i'm being picky.
    If you just clear up the wrong words, this has the potential to be a great love poem, so keep at it
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...That was amazing ^_^ What I wouldn't give to hear the man I love say that to me ^_^ Your very good at expressing the deep emotions that your writing about and making the reader feel them like they were their own =) I love that =) A well deserved 5 =D
    Rhea