Wow...That was amazing ^_^ What I wouldn't give to hear the man I love say that to me ^_^ Your very good at expressing the deep emotions that your writing about and making the reader feel them like they were their own =) I love that =) A well deserved 5 =D
Rhea

You have done a very good poem here, the only thing that throws me off is the spelling mistakes. I'm very particular about grammer and spelling so thats why i'm being picky.
If you just clear up the wrong words, this has the potential to be a great love poem, so keep at it
*Gem*