Hey girlie. I gave this a 5, the flow i thought was excellent and the rhythm and rhyme where u used it was good too. imagery was perfect and your vocab - ace =]
i dont think you need to worry at all about writers block or anything.
well done chica =]
take care
Geo
if u have time, please comment my latest? =]

Actually I find its flow tad inconsistent. The whole piece further could use a bit of restructuring. (It's quite difficult to read.) But, even so, I'll give you my props for the effort you had exerted to produce this piece. all the best and take care

I found the flow to be a bit off putting. It was not consistent. it is a bit hard to read at times. once i got through that it was a good poem. 5/5

Kalee

I thought this was really good. Sometimes it was hard to find the flow but it usually came back into place : ] Your descriptions and vocabluary were great. Good job

Sorry, but I don't like it. You could to wrote it better, atmosphere could be stronger and flow is a little bit off. This is just my opinion, this one is interesting, it isn't bad, but your other poems are deeper and you can use some more metaphors.