I want fireworks to burn in my soul
But when they do, they only leave holes.
I'm doomed to feel nothing in my heart.
'Cause when he gets close to me, I fall apart.
The fireworks part gave beautiful imagry even if it is in a weird way!
Great Job!
5/5
_-Amber-_
Honestly girl your poems are just amazing! The last two stanzas are just breath-taking! You have so much talent...I mean, wow. I can't believe how often I can feel what your saying. AMAZING!
~Midnight Sun