Is true love so true?

by miss insecurity   Jun 11, 2007


True love, true love,
But is it picture perfect?
Things last forever, things fall apart,
Hey what did I expect?

Delicate as a butterfly,
Yet everyone wants a hold,
We think we have the real thing,
But it's no better than fool's gold.

We are all just merely subjects
In cupids twisted game,
He plays us all like puppets
No matter what it's all the same.

So who was it who said there's only one,
For each of us to love?
Is it slow or happens straight away?
Is it sent from up above?

I think love is just a word
Like hot or cool or rad,
It's a bit like skinny jeans,
Love is the next new fad.

It's thrown around like tennis balls,
It gets people in bed,
It helps if you want to rip someone off,
It's as common out there as bread.

But with you sometimes it's different,
Too bad it didn't work.
We had something great going,
And I miss you for what it's worth.

We got along so well, you know,
Like outer space and an astronaut,
But the black hole's gravity became too great,
If anything it's my fault.

But now it's too late for talk like that
It could get someone hurt,
He is such a prick you know
It's as good as written on his shirt.

One day maybe it shall be again
We'll have a second chance,
But til then friends we shall stay
And I just wanted to say thanks.
_______________________

~dedicated to joey~

and thanks to rachael and macca

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Oh soo good its going on my favorites :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    You write a little bit above your age (and I definitely don't mean that in a negative way). You just strike me as someone older than 14.

    Your last stanza seemed a little bit forced, but you used wonderful metaphors throughout the poem, and your rhyming was virtually flawless, with the exception of the last stanza.

    Great job.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by my heads on upside down

    Ooooohhhh my names on it ;p
    well i jus hav to say it turned out great!
    u r pro! beautiful job, as usual
    5/5
    love always xXx