Comments : The Eye Of A Tiger (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    That was really nice!! meaningful too....

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was another great acrostic I feell the tigeer 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Been wondering when ur next poem would be, and tis a great one, u already know i like the style, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! you deserve it, keep the coming!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BEING{FACETIOUS}

    OH YOU DO SO WELL ON THE ACROSTIC POEMS REALLY AWSOME JOB

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this! It really touched me because I HATE how animals are caged up! They deserve to be out in the world like nature intended them to be. It was nice to read a different kind of poem from you, usually they're love poems, so it is nice to see you expand your talent onto this...and you did a wonderful job on it. :]

    I did notice one thing though, in the line...

    "Reacting as if caged for live, then just maybe, they'd understand."

    Is 'live' supposed to be 'life'?

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This is a wonderful piece! I'm tough when it comes to acrostics, but this is written very well. I HATE how animals are caged up, and you really brought the reader into his (the animal's) world. Awesome.

    Very meaningful.
    Nice job.
    Keep 'em coming.

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Heartfelt and always a topical subject. It flowed well which can often be a problem with this style of poem.
    Personally I found it a little simplistic towards the end and would have preferred the stronger more elegant style used to begin. However, your message remains clear and emphatic.

  • Metaphor is outstanding and this poem has powerful rhythm. Imagery is wonderful and your wording is excellent. Well done, very deep piece. It deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Acrostics are hard but you pulled it off very well in this piece. The topic is not cliched at all, and it very accurately describes the captivity of animals. Amazing job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    If this poem doesn't touch the heart and soul of anyone that reads it they aren't human!
    This poem is not solely about the poor damn tiger, this is about something that really riles me up! These animals are meant to be wild - it's not just their bodies that are wild, their spirits are wild. To take that out of their life is killing the animals soul! Apologies for the rant.

    Acrostic poems are hard enough to accomplish without getting a thorough meaning across, this poem ensnares the reader from the get-go and never lets go.

    Wonderful piece of art about a cruel, cruel industry!

    Another marvellous piece Joe.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.