by Cyma Khan
That was really nice!! meaningful too.... |
Wow that was another great acrostic I feell the tigeer 5/5 |
Been wondering when ur next poem would be, and tis a great one, u already know i like the style, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! you deserve it, keep the coming!!! |
OH YOU DO SO WELL ON THE ACROSTIC POEMS REALLY AWSOME JOB |
I loved this! It really touched me because I HATE how animals are caged up! They deserve to be out in the world like nature intended them to be. It was nice to read a different kind of poem from you, usually they're love poems, so it is nice to see you expand your talent onto this...and you did a wonderful job on it. :] |
This is a wonderful piece! I'm tough when it comes to acrostics, but this is written very well. I HATE how animals are caged up, and you really brought the reader into his (the animal's) world. Awesome. |
Heartfelt and always a topical subject. It flowed well which can often be a problem with this style of poem. |
Metaphor is outstanding and this poem has powerful rhythm. Imagery is wonderful and your wording is excellent. Well done, very deep piece. It deserves 5/5 |
Acrostics are hard but you pulled it off very well in this piece. The topic is not cliched at all, and it very accurately describes the captivity of animals. Amazing job. |
by Pete
If this poem doesn't touch the heart and soul of anyone that reads it they aren't human! |