by handsome Jun 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Instinct and feeling is not enough...cos instinct could be that which you are praying to happen...if he tells u he loves u and u doubt it ...that's it...its not love. see...love when it comes, pure and true, does not need any form of confirmation...u just know it...when he holds u and its love u know it...u feel it...you live it...it transcends the physical...it is kind of spiritual...and that is what makes it love...that is why u often times cannot control it...cos its larger than you!!!! |
by SeXiSaMi
I REALLY like this one.... i never thought of love this way.. but definitely makes the reader think twice when saying they love someone.. i don't know but i really enjoyed it.. keep up the great work & god bless |
I LOVE IT!!!!! this is the type of poem that inspired me to stop looking for love cause when time is right then i will know! |
by Vanessa
Now that is profound, and it really made me think you are so right. to make it seem a little more professional you should write out the shortcuts u should be you, and so on just an opion. i really like this the word choice is briallant, and the message is vivid 5/5 |
by softheart
Wow, u are so right |