I'd just like to start off by saying that I loved the title. It was simple and perfect for this poem. The poem itself was good, but perhaps a little too simple. The length, was good, as was what was being expressed. I usually don't like love poems because everybody thinks they can write them, when in truth, they're the hardest to write. Anyway, i think you did a good job, not excellent, but good enough.

Brad

Hey this is reallly good. <3

Its a cool poem, keep up the good work

This is the best of your poems (that i've read so far). i love it. keep it up =]