OMG!! That was hot!! I think you should title it My Ecstasy.....

WOW, HOT DAMN, this is one spicy hot treat.... love the words you used in this one. I think I'll go take a nice cold shower now!! LOL.... naughty and erotic but done with taste and flare!

Your poem made me want to have sex, you write so well, you should try to publish this.