That poem was very beautifully written....i loved it.......the way u rhymed at the end really gave the poem a real impact on any reader that reads it....it was inspiring......randii (female)

Hi there. Excellent poem.
It had a good rythmn & nice flow.

I feel anxious.
Maybe nervous too,
Do you ever feel this way?
Do you?

That bit was excellent, my favorite part. It was strong & it seemed to hit home with me.
Keep up the good writing.
5/5 Bec.x