I Don't Love You

I sure would hate to find that poem in my locker! haha.. You have a lot of poems about love and they all are good. my the way i added you as a favorite. You give good comments. thanks! 5/5

Really great flow loved the feeling to it over all just amazing really great work what else can i say 5/5 from me

OH tis is sad!me want to cry now! dast xosh

I liked this write, the second stanza really struck me. i can relate to this in some ways, but not entirely. i would like to think that love is more than a game. but then again. love is strange. if at all there is a such thing called love anyhow.
good work man, good work.

Ah gee, this was so full of love and hurt, well that is how i found it, how i read it.

all i can now suggest is a use of more longer and not used words in your poem.

but still 5/5 from me, David