The life of a gurl with a broken heart

by naty   Jun 11, 2007


When she was 7 she got her first kiss
from her first love she felt alive
she couldnt stop thinkin of him all night
7 years passed now she is 14 and the love that she had for him increase she still cant forget the day they broked up and her heart got torn up apart
she saw him again but now he even forgot her name
she try to avoid him but it was hard because she misses him alot she wanted it to talk to him it was a temptation she couldnt resist but shes trying to move on and now i have to make a confession becuz this gurl its me

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Nice. this was good. just fix the grammar and give it structure, maybe add a little more and its wonderful. im giving it a five five.